Sunday, October 31, 2010

Outline Update

Part 1-A:
The main character meets an "Angel" who is trapped in a physical form. Saving the "Angel" the character is deemed worthy of meeting with God. The saving of the "angel" seems relatively trivial
Characters:
The Main Character
The Farm Boy who comes to a city thats shades of Soddom and Gamorra with heaping helpings of Hong Kong and New York to buy some slaves to turn into indentured servants on the family Farm
The Angel:
A Hemaproditic Angel (who appears feminine) The MC buys him because he was able to get the slaves on a discount and this was a surplus of funds
Part 1-B:
The Angel tries to tempt him into accepting a Payment (First with base physiological needs: Sex, Food, and Wine. Second with great wealth and treasurer. Third with Glory. And last with offers of power.) for its Freedom. The MC refuses
Part 1-C:
The Angel reveals its true nature to the MC and says that it cannot allow this act to transpire without a payment. And that he will help him see his master who shall reward him.
Part 2:
The MC is also given sufficient resources to have guardians to go meet with god And assemble a party of Guardians. One of them from each religious group mentioned bellow. 2 men and 2 women of appropriate Fantasy genre type
Part 3 They commit to their Heroic Journey
Part 4-?? They travel through the city of the false gods and are tempted by one of the false gods. A member of the guardians falls to temptation. (Their will be a god to parallel Jesus, Muhammad, Buddha, Vishnu, and "Traditional Chinese Gods" at a minimum) The MC meets the Demon King (ruler of the city of the gods) who tempts him to join him. When he fails he sends him to meet god.
Part X. The Hero meets god, confronts him and god gives him the sacred knowledge
Part Q. The Hero is then given the Dilemma: Men will confuse, misuse, and all and all screw up the message. Including him as a new prophet. He will end up creating another false god to be worshiped. So he can be a prophet, or he can go find another way to use this knowledge
Part E. The Hero rejects the path of the Prophet and takes the wisdom of god and leads the people another way. He starts the beginning of a new golden age of enlightened philosophy. Which will lead to a break from the sword and sorcery world they are in (in the fullness of time)

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